This one is so obvious

I personally think you are very talented and you could do better, i am saying that you should`ve made the girl look more younger and prettier.
That lady look old and really weird if you want your work to be really cool and attractive do something appropriate for the person , if you`re gonna do something fun and sexy do it with young and sexy people and fun.
I don`t understand the purpose of this picture its so unprofessional, i totally hate it , like you could do better girl or boy whatever, the face , the face , thhhhheeee face is horribly ugly and saggy, i hate it , i think my little brother can do better than you, i love artists ,they are the best creators on earth and geuss what you just ruin this for them, like Sandro Botticelli would`nt paint the birth of venus the goddess of beauty if he saw this horrible draw, and Edvard Munch would`ve keep painting the scream after seeing this horrible drawing.
done!